Isis ([info]isiscolo) wrote,
@ 2005-08-04 21:49:00
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Entry tags:crossover, fic, sga

Stargate Atlantis xover fic: Burning (Kavanagh/Montag, R)
Title: Burning
Author: Isis ([info]isiscolo)
Pairing: Dr. Kavanagh (Stargate Atlantis) / Guy Montag (Fahrenheit 451)
Rating: R
Length: about 1350 words
Spoilers: vaguely for season 2 of SGA
Notes: For the [info]ithurtsmybrain pairing list that ate fandom current round, pairing#364. If you don't recall the Bradbury book, there's a summary here, but actually all you need is a vague idea about it to get this fic. Thanks to [info]fabularasa for beta (earth!) and encouragement.


Sometimes he thinks he'd like to see the whole place in flames. Atlantis burning to the waterline, and wouldn't that be a sight? Of course the hybrid metal alloys the city was constructed from probably don't burn. But still.

That would show them, wouldn't it. Those jarheads who act like they own the place. That asshole McKay. That cunt Weir, and honestly, what was she still doing in charge? The lieutenant who recorded their messages must have cut his part from the transmission, that was probably it. He should have known Weir would never let him send it to the SGC.

It doesn't bother him that his own laboratory would burn with the rest. Even his own research, because they won't let him publish, fucking security clearance bullshit, and there goes any chance at a Nobel, right there.

It's a good daydream, but he can only lean back in his chair with his eyes closed for so long; then he gets back to work.



He whirls angrily at the sound of footsteps, because he hates being bothered while he's in his laboratory.

"Dr. Kavanagh?" The man holds out a hand. "Guy Montag. I've been reading your notes on using a platinum catalyst to increase the naquadah energy yield. Brilliant work, there."

He inclines his head, only slightly mollified by the compliment. Montag is wearing a SGC-standard lab coat; one of the new scientists that came in on the Daedalus, no doubt. "So you're working on the energy problem, too?" he says, to be polite, but he's thinking: if he steals my theory I'm going to publish before he can, security clearance or no security clearance.

"Whatever you need me to do, Dr. Kavanagh," Montag says, giving him a conspiratorial smile. "You're doing the most important work here in Atlantis. Some of us appreciate that."

Well, I'll be damned, he thinks. Because they never have appreciated him, never listened to him, and when something goes right it's always McKay who takes the credit. But somebody must have been paying attention at the SGC, for them to send him an assistant. Maybe now he can actually get something done.



He's getting a lot of things done, as it turns out. A lot of late nights in the lab, Montag quietly working just out of his sight, titrating the test solutions, running the yield calculations, bringing him coffee. The equations suggest they can increase the generator power almost by a factor of two, if they can just determine the right matrix and the right solvent.

Platinum, molybdenum steel, monel; acetone, methanol, toluene. Montag has made a number of intelligent suggestions, and Kavanagh worries, a bit, that he might be angling for his job. He hears Simpson and Zelenka talking with McKay in the hallway, low, earnest voices that trail off into silence at his approach, and his gut clenches into a tight ball of mistrust. When he accidentally knocks a beaker of kerosene off the bench, he blames Montag.

Montag cleans up the shattered glass without being asked.



Dr. Carolyn Eisentritt is a meteorologist; she's modelling the planet's weather, designing a system of sensors so they can predict the next big storm a little earlier next time. She's also almost as tall as Kavanagh, with honey-blonde hair and deep blue eyes, and the way her hips move when she walks down the hall is pure poetry.

She's eating by herself tonight in the mess hall, so he takes his tray over to her table. "I've got a good CD of Prokofiev, the St. Petersburg Symphony Orchestra," he says. "Come over after dinner and listen to it with me?"

God, her eyes are beautiful. Even when they're looking at him, as they are now, with a mixture of scorn and pity. "I've told you. I'm not interested in going out with you."

"It's not 'going out.' Just listening to music," he lies, because of course it's just a pretext, of course he wants that honeyed hair brushing against his skin, those long legs wrapped around him.

"Yeah, right. You're so pathetic," she says, and gets up, taking her food with her.



He goes back to the lab in a white-hot fury, thinking of Carolyn Fucking Eisentritt flying out to check on her sensors and crashing her jumper into the Atlantian ocean - no, into a fucking mountain, ramming into the rocks, going up in a big ball of flame. He slams the door behind him, and he thought he'd be alone, but there's Montag in the corner with his feet propped on the desk, reading an old issue of J. Electrochem. Soc.

"You're still here," Kavanagh says.

Montag shrugs. "Waiting for you." He puts the journal down carefully, almost with reverence, then slides to his feet with a smooth, easy motion. "Don't waste your time on that bitch," he says.

Kavanagh frowns, wondering how Montag knows about Carolyn. Has he said anything to him? He can't remember.

"She doesn't respect you," Montag says, coming towards him. "None of them do." His eyes are frank, confident, warm; he reaches out a hand and caresses Kavanagh's shoulder, draws him close. He smells a bit like kerosene.

When Montag kisses him it knocks his eyeglasses awry, and when he lifts his hand to adjust them Montag intercepts him, plucks the glasses off, places them on the lab bench. Montag is not as pretty as Carolyn but Carolyn won't kiss him and Montag will. They back up against a worktable which thank God is mostly clear of anything breakable, anything that could get in the way, because Montag has him pinned, almost, devouring him with hot and hungry kisses. He moans when Montag's hand undoes his pants, moans again when Montag drops to his knees. He closes his eyes and lets it happen, thrusts into Montag's mouth, and when he comes he is not thinking of Carolyn at all.



They are working through the night, because Kavanagh got an idea and Montag ran the model and agrees that it looks good. He uses tweezers to lift the sliver of naquadah, all he's allowed to use for testing purposes, and carefully slots it into the copper matrix.

"There," he says with satisfaction. "How's the radiation level?"

"Holding steady," says Montag, and points at the dots moving across the screen in an orderly phalanx. Kavanagh holds out a hand, and Montag gives him the beaker of kerosene.



When he wakes up in the infirmary he hears a beep, beep, beep and Beckett is there in an instant. "Don't move," Beckett says, but Kavanagh moves to adjust his glasses, because for some reason his vision's terribly blurry, and every nerve in his arm screams with pain.

"What happened?" he says, or tries to say, because his mouth doesn't move correctly, his lips don't obey him, and it hurts, it all hurts, and Beckett moves towards him with a big syringe, and he sinks back into cushioned sleep.



The second time he wakes up Beckett is bending over him with his hands full of gauze. It takes a moment to realize that the gauze is being unreeled from his arm, bit by bit, as though he were an Egyptian mummy.

"What happened?" he croaks, and this time it comes out almost correctly.

"What happened?" an incredulous voice repeats from his other side, and he turns his head laboriously to see McKay glaring at him, his arms crossed. "Where did you get your degree, Wal-Mart? What the hell were you thinking?"

"Rodney," says Beckett, warningly, but McKay ignores him. "You're lucky you only blew up your own lab. Naquadah in kerosene? What the hell were you trying to do, Kavanagh, kill us all?"

Oh God, he thinks, and says: "Montag. Is he all right?"

"Who the hell is Montag?" says McKay.



He's confined to quarters in the Daedalus, but that's okay, he's got a window. He presses his face to it to watch as they take off into the dawn. For a moment the city's windows glow red with a thousand fires, catching the rising sun; then the Daedalus slants sharply upward, and Atlantis recedes behind them.


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[info]verstehen
2005-08-04 08:53 pm UTC (link)
I'm honestly afraid to read this. I have no the words to describe the fear settling into my gut when I saw the pairing. Lord.

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[info]isiscolo
2005-08-04 08:58 pm UTC (link)
I think it turned out astonishingly good, but of course I'm biased. But you don't have to read it if you don't want to. It's serious, not humor, if that makes any difference to you.

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(no subject) - [info]verstehen, 2005-08-04 09:22 pm UTC (Expand)
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[info]crystalheaven
2005-08-04 09:07 pm UTC (link)
Ok, was scared to read this, but actually, it turned out really good. Congrats.

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[info]isiscolo
2005-08-04 09:12 pm UTC (link)
Thank you very much! I cherish all readers of something like this, believe me.

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[info]wickedwords
2005-08-04 09:13 pm UTC (link)
This was really quite cool. The pacing of the story was excellent, building up the slow reveal of what had been happening; I loved the way you kept using both scent and sight to underscore the motif you had going. Thanks.

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[info]isiscolo
2005-08-04 09:20 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so much. I worked hard on the pacing, you can bet, so I'm pleased you noticed - something like this is an architectural story, depending strongly on the structure.

The scent of kerosene is a theme running through Bradbury's book, of course.

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[info]spyderqueen
2005-08-04 09:19 pm UTC (link)
Woah. This is AMAZING.

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[info]isiscolo
2005-08-04 09:22 pm UTC (link)
Thank you very much!

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[info]fenris_wolf0
2005-08-04 09:47 pm UTC (link)
Er. Argh.

Frightening.

Good job!

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[info]isiscolo
2005-08-04 09:54 pm UTC (link)
Um, thanks? I think?

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[info]mice1900
2005-08-04 09:48 pm UTC (link)
This was fascinating, and quite well written. Loved the strangeness at the end.

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[info]isiscolo
2005-08-04 09:55 pm UTC (link)
Thank you very much. Of course the strangeness is ripped off from A Beautiful Mind.

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(no subject) - [info]mice1900, 2005-08-04 11:00 pm UTC (Expand)

[info]libitina
2005-08-04 10:02 pm UTC (link)
Awwww... *pets Kavanaugh*

I have a theory - what do you think: I think that SGA is made for crack!fic.

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[info]isiscolo
2005-08-04 10:08 pm UTC (link)
Obviously I agree with you.

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[info]metron_ariston
2005-08-04 10:41 pm UTC (link)
Dude, wow.

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[info]fabularasa
2005-08-05 05:31 am UTC (link)
EEEE! Your icon! And the perfect quotation. Hee.

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[info]nullabona
2005-08-05 05:55 am UTC (link)
I really like this! I liked the character’s voices and the effective way you blended/bent/melded/melted universes. Great writing.

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[info]isiscolo
2005-08-05 06:23 am UTC (link)
Thank you very much. Actually, I like crossovers and pastiches for that exact reason - the challenge of incorporating elements from one universe into another. Obviously this one is pretty much pure SGA-verse, but bringing a character into it who has roots in another work was really a fun thing to do.

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[info]vileseagulls
2005-08-05 05:57 am UTC (link)
Um, wow. Even having never read the book (am a bad bad girl), this has a hell of a punch. I love it.

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[info]isiscolo
2005-08-05 06:24 am UTC (link)
Oh, thank you. Basically, all you need to know is that Montag sets things on fire for a living, and that he (during the course of the book) comes to value knowledge and quiet heroism.

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[info]z_rayne
2005-08-05 09:42 am UTC (link)
I'm thoroughly convinced that you could write absolutely anything and make it good. This was incredible.

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[info]isiscolo
2005-08-05 09:57 am UTC (link)
Thank you very much. It was a bunny that grabbed my head as soon as I saw the pairing, and it wouldn't let go until I wrote it.

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[info]rosewildeirish
2005-08-05 11:00 am UTC (link)
Wow, I really liked this. Went in with the same trepidation most did...but I love it.

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[info]isiscolo
2005-08-05 11:42 am UTC (link)
Thanks very much - I'm glad you overcame that trepidation, I am.

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[info]reginagiraffe
2005-08-05 11:27 am UTC (link)
This was really creepy. I love it! I always knew Kavanagh had a weak link in him somewhere.

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[info]isiscolo
2005-08-05 11:43 am UTC (link)
Thank you! See, Kavanagh's not really an asshole - he's just batshit insane. Um.

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[info]0uka
2005-08-05 01:05 pm UTC (link)
the only character i recognise is Montag (sorry 'bout that?)
but. . .i like it. it's interesting. . .i like the perspective, and non-corniness of it.
i don't know why everyone seems to be afriad of it. . ? maybe i would be if i knew the other characters >.>

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[info]isiscolo
2005-08-05 01:16 pm UTC (link)
Heh, you're coming from the opposite direction everybody else is. Hmm. Atlantis is a city on another planet in another galaxy built by an incredibly advanced civilization who are no longer there, the people in it are earth scientists and military who are all trying to figure things out; Kavanagh is a minor character who is generally an arrogant jerk (he's the guy in the icon [info]metron_ariston used in the comments above) and who in an episode last season sent a message to the headquarters on earth complaining about all the leadership. McKay is the head of the scientists, is also very arrogant, a bit of a jerk, but is mostly a good guy. Carolyn is my Mary-Sue, totally invented.

Honestly, I am amazed this makes sense to anyone who doesn't already know Stargate: Atlantis. But thank you so much for reading it, I appreciate it a lot.

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[info]amanuensis1
2005-08-06 09:18 am UTC (link)
Cheese and crackers, man. I can't think of a stronger epithet right now, my brain is...well, it's not hurting. It actually feels pretty full and satisfied.

"Who the hell is Montag?" says McKay.

Surreal and understated and exactly the way I love to be wrung out and hung up to dry. Woah. *applauds mightily*

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[info]isiscolo
2005-08-06 10:10 am UTC (link)
Thank you! I don't do surreal very frequently, so it was a challenge, but also a lot of fun, and man, when I saw this pairing the whole story just grabbed me by the lapels. I am happy that discerning readers like you appreciate it!

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[info]bethbethbeth
2005-08-07 08:35 am UTC (link)
Wow. This is quite wonderful, I.

(and now that you've made me think about Bradbury's book...you know the girl who lives next door to the Montags and talks to Guy about how nobody sees grass anymore, they just think of it as a blur of green? She could be Luna Lovegood's cousin!)

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[info]isiscolo
2005-08-07 08:41 am UTC (link)
Thanks very much!

And, that's a really cool idea. I know [info]ithurtsmybrain is supposed to be brain-hurting, but crossover pairings sometimes spark amazing creativity by forcing you to look for analogs and parallels between two works.

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[info]unlovablehands
2005-08-08 02:35 pm UTC (link)
Holy crap. That was surprisingly cool. I, too, have a wee soft spot for Kavanagh's odiousness. Pleased I'm not the only crazy one. :)

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[info]isiscolo
2005-08-08 02:44 pm UTC (link)
Thanks a lot! We can form a club, Kavanagh's Idiocy's Sorta Sexy. Um, all four of us. :-)

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[info]violin_road
2005-08-15 02:40 am UTC (link)
I — wow. I found this surfing around, and okay, so, it's admittedly four-thirty am and possibly I should be asleep and so it might be a state-of-mind thing, but wow. This was ... this was gorgeous; this was lyrical in places and startlingly not-so in others and the characters, man, and — I'm really just babbling, but wow, this is perfect. I don't even find it scary or weird, because it works so well. And now I'm going to ... shut up and just add it to my memories.

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[info]isiscolo
2005-08-15 10:29 am UTC (link)
Aw, thanks very very much. This is so much of a fringe story that it really gives me joy when anybody appreciates it. Even if at 4:30 am.

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[info]leksa
2005-10-23 02:39 pm UTC (link)
Oh goodness. Oh goodness. I've been sitting here for a good while now, alternating between rereading just a bit just one more time and just sort of staring at the computer screen with my mouth hanging open. Because, yes yes yes. It's such utter crack and it makes such completely perfect sense - and it's chilling and beautiful and crazy awful and, Kavanagh! eeee.

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[info]isiscolo
2005-10-31 08:11 am UTC (link)
Thanks so much! I know it's such a weird pairing and a strange story that it makes me very happy when someone reacts so favorably. I very much appreciate your comment.

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[info]mousewrites
2006-03-31 04:34 pm UTC (link)
Wow...

I love Kavanagh. I know, I'm going to hell for that, but I do. He's ornery, but totaly unlovable. Except by me, apperently.

This was cool. I read the ending, and went, buh? and then it sunk in. I had realized that maybe Montag wasn't real, but what was really going on escaped me right until the end. Nice job!

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[info]isiscolo
2006-04-01 05:57 pm UTC (link)
I really like him as a character - I mean, he's an asshat, but he's sort of cute in his asshattery, and he makes an important foil. If you've seen McKay's appearance on SG-1, he's actually very much like Kavanagh in those episodes!

And thanks so much for the compliment. Needless to say, this is sort of my rip-off of "A Beautiful Mind."

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[info]lobelia321
2006-03-31 05:30 pm UTC (link)
I'm not so fond of listening so I did the reading instead. *g* This was great!

Montag is not as pretty as Carolyn but Carolyn won't kiss him and Montag will.
Fantastic line.

I really liked Kavanagh's voice here. I hate him on the programme, he gets on my nerves with his ponytail and prissy forehead (as no doubt he is meant to, heh) but I hadn't realised what a fantastic narrator he makes. Was it fun writing him? It seems to have been. (Wonderful, and slightly shocking, to read the words 'that cunt Weir'.)

The lines 'who the hell is Montag' worked very punchily.

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[info]isiscolo
2006-04-01 05:59 pm UTC (link)
Oh, it is always fun writing the sort-of-bad guys. I think there is a freedom in it. And of course writing a sort-of-bad sort-of-crazy guy is really fun!

If you haven't seen the season 2 episode Critical Mass, you must, because Kavanagh is !!! in it. He is such a jerk, but I actually like him a lot as a foil to the other characters.

Thanks very much for your comments!

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