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my yuletide story revealed: Merry Christmas, Dr. Fleischman (Northern Exposure) 
1st-Jan-2006 08:54 am
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Now that the initial seekret-santa period is over, I have put my [info]yuletide story up on my website:

Merry Christmas, Dr. Fleischman | Northern Exposure, ensemble gen, G, humor/drama, 2800 words. Joel's friends want to get him the perfect Christmas gift. (Link to version at the Yuletide archive.) Written for Signe ([info]oxoniensis), and beta-read by [info]fabularasa and [info]barkley. Barkley also patiently answered all my questions about canon and made some excellent suggestions that were incorporated into the final version. I could not have written this story without her help.

ETA: [info]oxoniensis has made a cover!

I know that a lot of you are probably surprised that I wrote in a TV fandom, considering that I've mentioned several times that I don't own a television. This has not always been the case; when I moved in with B. in 1990, he had a television. It had come with the house when he bought it, and the only thing he used it for was watching sports.

We were visiting his family, a 7-hour drive from where we lived at the time, and for some reason he wanted to stay longer to help out with something. Fortunately, a family friend was driving back to our area and I hitched a ride with him; during the long drive we talked about all sorts of things, including his favorite TV show that he assured me I would love.

And I did. I don't remember the first episode I saw - it would have been late season 1 or early season 2 - but I was totally and completely hooked from the beginning. I fell head-over-heels in love with the characters. I saw aspects of myself in Joel and in Maggie, Ed was my weird but brilliant little brother, and I wanted to be Ruth-Anne when I grew up. The plots of the episodes were always interesting, and I especially liked the magical realism incorporated in stories such as Shelly's vision in the forest of famous mothers in history (and Mama Nature!) when she was pregnant, but for me it was always primarily about the characters. I didn't watch any other TV, but I watched this show religiously until Rob Morrow (Joel) left the show, which was clearly the end, even though the producers hoped it wouldn't be.

I hadn't thought much about Northern Exposure until late this summer, when my flist was buzzing over Numb3rs, which also stars Rob Morrow. That brought about a sort of NX renaissance for many, including me, as I downloaded the first three episodes (which I'd never seen) and got all nostalgic and misty-eyed. It was in that mood that I offered to write this fandom for Yuletide.

Signe requested gen humor with Joel, Maggie, Ed, and Ruth-Anne (who are my favorite characters as well as hers, so yay!)and for a while I was totally inspirationless. For some reason I had "gifts" stuck in my head, and all my early ideas revolved around gifts - gifts that each person might bring to Adam and Eve's wedding, Ed making a documentary about Cicely as a going-away gift for Joel...hey, this is for Yuletide, so what about Christmas gifts? Ideas started percolating in my head about Joel's friends trying to give him the perfect gift.

I remembered that there had been a wonderful Christmas episode, but only vaguely remembered the details, so I asked Barkley for a copy and she provided me with Seoul Mates, season 3 episode 10. Oh, man, I bawled my eyes out. Such emotion! Such sweetness! Shelly playing with the creche! Maurice trying to connect with his newly-discovered son! The Raven Pageant! I fell in love with the characters all over again. (And you should, too. As your reward for reading this, if you would like to download a copy of this episode, go here.)

My original idea was that the group should fly in genuine New York bagels and lox; when I ran it by [info]barkley, she reminded me that there actually had been an episode in which Joel had bagels and lox shipped to him (and no doubt my idea had been sparked by my memory of that episode). So I decided the "mystery present" should be latkes (hey, I'm Jewish too) - and Grandma Fleischman's latkes, at that - which actually made for a better story, I'm sure.

On Dec 15th I posted that I'd sent the story to beta, and said :
I started the actual writing five days ago, and almost immediately the structure started coming together. It was clear to me how many scenes would be needed, and how they would intersect, and how bits of the story would be told in different places. When fragments of dialogue started coming to me out of the blue, I knew the story had taken on its own life. (And that's really a necessity for me! It changes things from me trying to force a story, to the story existing and me just transcribing it.) When I was about halfway through I noticed that I'd written in an amusing bit of foreshadowing without even being aware of it - I'd written something in just as a descriptive element, to set the scene, but then I realized that it was actually relevant to the climax of the story. When I finished the last few paragraphs this morning, I felt pleased and astonished. This isn't a story I would ever have thought of writing on my own, but I'm so happy to have written it. I like it a lot, and I hope my recipient does, too!
The "foreshadowing" I mentioned is Dave's bringing French fries to the table, which I originally just stuck in while editing the scene I'd just written, because I know that I tend to skimp on scene-setting description and figured I ought to bring the Brick into focus in the reader's mind. But hey, French fries are basically fried potatoes, just like latkes! And when I realized that, I giggled like a loon and then deliberately wrote a "French fry scene" into the next Brick segment. Damn, I love Dave. I love them all!

I'm really thrilled that nearly all the comments and recs of this story mentioned the characterization and the true-to-episode feel. Because for me, what matters most about this fandom are the characters. I love them so much, and I am pleased that this love was evident in the story. Now go forth and write me more Northern Exposure fic!
Comments 
1st-Jan-2006 04:13 pm (UTC)
Like you, I watched NE religiously until Rob Morrow left; I adored that show and its quirkiness. The characters were so engaging, and I loved pretty much the entire cast, although I remember my favorite character was the DJ (can't remember his name off-hand); I loved his laid-back zen demeanor.

I'll definitely have to bookmark your story to read as soon as I have a chance -- and I think I'll be checking Netflix to see if they have any episodes on DVD, too.
1st-Jan-2006 08:43 pm (UTC)
Chris in the morning! Oh, yeah. I enjoyed this show a lot.

Check out the link for the Xmas ep - it's really worth seeing.
1st-Jan-2006 04:17 pm (UTC)
I always love reading your authors notes around your stories. You make writing sound so interesting. *g*
1st-Jan-2006 08:45 pm (UTC)
Oh, I'm glad that these notes are interesting to someone other than me. :-)

BTW that was a pretty good guess you made - I offered Aubrey/Maturin, actually. I wish I'd written that story!
1st-Jan-2006 04:45 pm (UTC)
I had your story open in a tab to give feedback to, I really enjoyed it. Primarily, though, it made me *hungry*. Were you basing Grandma Fleischmann's latkes on a recipe of your own? I was surprised to see cumin included in the description.
1st-Jan-2006 08:46 pm (UTC)
Aw, thanks. And hee. My grandmother put cumin in *everything*.

Actually I don't like latkes, believe it or not, but I had in mind the recipe from Joan Nathan's Jewish Cooking In America, which is a great cookbook.
1st-Jan-2006 04:49 pm (UTC)
I just read your story. It was really good! Just like an episode of Northern Exposure. I could hear the character's voices. very nice!
wags, springwoof
1st-Jan-2006 08:46 pm (UTC)
Thanks very much - that's what I was aiming for.
1st-Jan-2006 04:51 pm (UTC)
Hey, this was marvelous! And mmm, latkes! I also grew up with the Christmas-but-not-really traditions, so the whole "never mind" concept definitely rings true.

And I'm totally with you in that there were maybe two tv shows I ever watched before I got into fandom -- Twin Peaks and Northern Exposure. And I would love to see more written in NE! If you haven't seen the DVDs, they are VERY cute, they come wrapped in little zippered sleeping bags.

And (pimping here) I wrote in NE for Yuletide two years ago; it's more slashy, but I hope as mystical and fun as yours. It's called Oy, Magic.
1st-Jan-2006 08:48 pm (UTC)
Glad you liked it! And actually, maybe you don't remember but I gave you feedback on your story, maybe at TWH in person, maybe by email sometime around then - I think I was inspired to read it because of a post by [info]barkley. And so you were Person #3 in my musing about the guessability of my stories - I figured you were the only person on my flist who was into the show and knew that I at least read it!
1st-Jan-2006 08:53 pm (UTC)
It was suitably oblique! And while I now recall that we talked about this, it was not at all clear when I read your previous post. I think it's that "isis does not equal tv" thing in my brain. But cool!
1st-Jan-2006 09:49 pm (UTC)
I read the story! And I read it for youuuuu, because though the show was quirky and cute, the times I did catch it in reruns (has to do with A&E running it at noon on weekdays and the television at work with limited cable channels) I wanted to take a big helping of smackdown to both Joel and Maggie. GOD they were nails-on-a-blackboard despicable, those two.

I loved the foreshadowing of the latkes with the French Fries! I loved/hated how in character Joel was, just as hatefully whiny as he was on the show. And Ed's unswerving cluelessness, awww.
1st-Jan-2006 11:52 pm (UTC)
Oh that was yours! I was and am impressed by this story, which reads like an actual episode. So much fun, but with a serious side.
2nd-Jan-2006 12:39 am (UTC)
It was your story that sent me on a hunt for NE downloads on the net. It took almost a week to get the entire file, and I've been glued to the computer ever since! So, thank you immensely for reminding me of something I used to love so much!
2nd-Jan-2006 02:23 am (UTC)
I made my friends watch Seoul Mates this weekend and they made the appropriate emotional responses at the end. (Of course, I kind of threatened to shoot them if they didn't go "Awwwwwww!") I do hope your story inspires people to write more, but even if it doesn't, I now have this story to read, and I love it so. Thank you so much for writing it.

I just love this show so much.
10th-Jan-2006 09:53 am (UTC) - Still catching up from the December fic explosion
Aww, this was sweet and funny. The love you have for the ensemble cast really shows through. I remember now how much I loved this show, when it was on.

I also snagged the ep, which I'm now realising is probably spectacularly bad timing. Sorry.
10th-Jan-2006 06:33 pm (UTC) - Re: Still catching up from the December fic explosion
Oh, I'm glad you liked it! And no problem taking the episode. DreamHost has increased bandwidth quotas tremendously and I have lots and lots of bandwidth available.
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